Synopsis
“This character-driven story explores identity, family, and ambition with absorbing detail and dark humor.”
Wallet, car keys, thirty-eight . . .
Neurodivergent 17 year old, Jo Retals, has always been an outsider. When the opportunity to gain respect comes his way, he can't resist. But he wasn’t prepared for rival dealers, jealous husbands and campus narcs. Set in the 1970s 'murder capital of the country', one question haunts Jo. Will he pull the trigger if he needs to?
Background
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Set in the dusk of Motor City’s eminence, Heat (1973) documents the demise of a personal empire in the context of a great city’s looming fall.
Like the behemoths of the financial sector in the early twenty-first century, the Detroit Mindset committed to unsustainable growth, despite market warning of imminent change.
In his suburban naiveté, the author steps into the world of illicit entrepreneurship, blind to the impediments that growing success will bring him.
In the era of Vietnam and Watergate, the author faces his personal disillusionment with family and society and the American Dream.
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Heat 1973 is a Crime novel, narrated by a naive, yet talented, criminal novice. The novel investigates why a white, suburban teen from an affluent home would willingly step into criminal enterprise.
The author’s internal journey is a coming of age story. The narrator faces the realization that the social institutions intended to support his development have actually been holding him back.
Based on actual events from the author’s life, Heat 1973 weaves parallel personal narratives – one an introspective confession by the narrator, the other a psychological profile by a narcotics detective.
Excerpt
I spot Duncan, bent over at the table. He sniffs, then jerks upward. Head thrown back, he rubs at the white powder on his nostrils. He shivers, then claps his hands. His gaze jerks around the room, finally landing on me.
“Mr. Style!” he calls.
I don’t know how you dress when you’re off duty, Detective, but to my white, suburban eye, Duncan’s the epitome of style. A short Afro with a goatee. His silk dress shirt is open one button, and a gold chain dangles around his neck. It matches that gold crown on his right incisor.
He’s jittery as he stalks over to me with his hand extended. “Where’d you find them boots, huh? I want to buy me a set.”
I rise and shake his hand. “I used to sell shoes at Hudson’s.”
“Hudson’s?” He rubs his nostrils again. “I’ll bet those set you back some.”
“I got a discount for working there.”
“A working man.” Duncan glances back to the tallest guy at the table. “A future entrepreneur.”
Chantelle steps in. “Leave him be, Duncan.”
Duncan frowns. He glances at his wife, then at me.
“Hey, you guys want a beer?” he asks. “Could we get our guests a beer, Chantelle?”
Chantelle and Duncan eyeball each other for a moment. As Chantelle heads out to the kitchen, the two women at the table follow her.
By now, I could use a beer; my throat stings from all the smoke. Still, I wasn’t complaining. I’m seventeen years old, down in the city at a coke house, having a beer with grown men. And they’re treating me like a grown man; you catch my drift? I mean, I even have a nickname — Mr. Style. Chantelle started calling me that and it stuck.
Back at the table, Liam rockets upright. He rubs his nose and shakes his head. “Damn, Duncan. This is some Hi-Test stuff.”
Duncan claps his hands. “That’s my style; Hi-Test.”
Liam hands Duncan a stack of folded bills. Liam catches Garret’s eye and nods toward the small table. His fucking little brother. I guess looking back, I sound pretty hypocritical, huh? Yet, I remember feeling bummed out when Garrett went over to the table.
Liam glances at me. “Step up, man.”
“Thanks, man. Not my thing.”
Duncan clamps a hand on my shoulder. “You a narc?”
“No way, man." I pull away. “But if you have any weed around, I’ll be happy to toke up.”
Duncan laughs and retracts his hand. “I’m only fucking with you, man. Liam says you’re cool, you’re cool.”
I smile. “You have any more of that weed that Liam gave us, I’m in the market.”
“Nah, I’m strictly powder.”
Duncan glances back at the tall guy. He joins us. He’s dark-skinned and older, wearing the hell out of a camel, corduroy sports jacket, not unlike mine. No wonder Chantelle likes my style.
“Mr. Style, here, is slinging a little weed,” Duncan tells him.
“So, you a THC entrepreneur?” the tall guy asks.
“Now and again. Weed; a little hashish.”
“You ever get ripped off?” the tall guy asks.
I snort. “Not in high school.”
He steps back. “You still in high school? No offense, but I can’t never tell how old you people are.”
“I’m in college now,” I tell him.”
Duncan laughs. “You don’t look old enough to be in college, man.”
“Yeah, I hear that a lot. But hey, I’m seventeen and in college. So, I’m not stupid.”
“No, we ain’t sayin that,” the tall guy says.
Duncan lifts the front of his shirt. He’s got a revolver in his waistband.
Just like in the movies; except this isn't the fucking movies, this is real. I gape. As a guy, how did you feel when they handed you a pistol to wear, Detective?
“You're young,” Duncan says, “older dudes might think they can take advantage of you.”
The tall guy nods. “An easy rip-off.”
Duncan lowers his shirt. “What you need is a deterrent.”
“Heat,” the tall guy says.
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